Zimi the killer

 
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Всего голосов: 8

Zimi the killer

Zimi, that was the girl's name. She is 25 years old, lives in New Jersey, temporarily lives with her parents. Zimi, a very beautiful girl, had long brown hair tied into two low ponytails with blue and green streaks.
The girl's usual attire was a mid-length black dress, her favorite stilettos, and she wore a blue hooded sweatshirt over it.

Zimi studied at the university, she did not have friends and boyfriends, as the girl was very quiet, modest and withdrawn and always stood in the corner watching people. The girl had a sister named Claire, she was 12 years old. She was cheerful, lively and not obedient, Claire differed from other children in that she loved to be very mischievous and dress in men's clothes.

Claire and Zimi always spent their time together. One fine day, Claire introduced her friend to her sister and said that his name is Jan, he is a good person, and Claire is going for a walk with him today. Zimi agreed. She was glad that Claire had a best friend, and yet she was not friends with anyone because of her older sister. When the couple went for a walk, Zimi did household chores with her parents. All those beautiful days that Claire spent with Ian and didn't think about her sister. Zimi felt like the last bastard and wanted to make a friend, but all people seemed bad to her.

On the third night Claire was not at home, it was strange, it was very late in the city. Claire's phone was at home; she didn't take it with her. The father began to look for his daughter wherever possible, but found her on the street, crippled and unconscious. He took her to the hospital and told his wife and Zimi about it.

Zimi blamed her friend Claire for everything, she got angry. She began to get nervous, cry, and Claire seemed to her all the time, although she was not around. In the morning, Zimi was coming home from class and walking past Claire's school. The girl saw Jan, after which she hid behind a tree and decided to eavesdrop on Jan's conversation, as he was talking with his best friend.

The conversation does not develop in the best way, it turns out that Jan and Claire had a falling out, which led to a fight. Zimi did not interfere in the conversation and quietly went home to suffer. By the time Zimi returned home, the doctors called her father and said that Claire had died and he was crying. The girl understood what had happened.

Zimi had strange feelings, very strong feelings. She wanted to hurt, the girl constantly reassured her father and restrained herself so as not to throw out her anger. At night, the girl took Claire's phone, found Jan's phone number and, using the Internet, found out where he lives.

When her father was asleep, Zimi took a kitchen knife and heated it on the radiator, then in the bathroom in front of the mirror, Zimi tore the left corner of her mouth right up to her ear. The pain was tolerable because the heated knife did not cause much pain. Zimi did not understand why she did this to herself, she just wanted to make herself beautiful and not ordinary so that no one would recognize her. Zimi bleached her face with cucumber juice to the point that her face became very white, painted her lips with black lipstick and put it in her pocket.

In this form, she decided to go to Yang and kill him, very cruelly. The girl with the knife took acid with her and went to her destination. Jan was at home alone, his parents were celebrating a neighbor's birthday. The girl knocked on the window, Jan did not know who was knocking and went to the window, saw Zimi, Jan did not figure out what to do. The girl broke the window and several fragments hit the guy in the face, the guy screamed in pain, grabbed his face and fell to his knees in pain.

The girl climbed into the house through a broken window and attacked the guy, inflicted many blows with a knife where she hit, in the chest, in the stomach, in the shoulders and somewhere else. Yang cried a lot, and Zimi repeated one thing: “That’s because you skipped school and hung noodles on my sister’s ears!” You ruined everything! I hate you! She died! You are guilty! "
When Yang stopped breathing, the girl doused his face with acid, after which she did not dare to see anyone. Zimi left the house through a broken window and went to a local abandoned building. No one saw Zimi after that night, and the schoolchildren began to sell.

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Tabletochka500
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Всего голосов: 8

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الدار كوسه
ماذا كان؟
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хрень полная. отмороженная!
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Прочитал половину. Хрень полная. Сразу видно, что уровень intermediate, не выше. Предложения построены слишком просто,без изюминки. Да и зачем это здесь в таком виде? Если считать как ielts, то 5 из 8, имхо. Хотя повторюсь, я не дочитал.
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Похоже не пересказ трэшового слэшера. Учите английский. Как пересказ школьника сойдет, но текст не художественный. Много Russian English'a.
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Жаль, что я этого не понимаю. Про зиму что-то, а чего конкретно там сталось - только догадуйся.
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Зими, зими, зими, а-ча, а-ча..
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